Well, I apologize. Writing is a very subjective business, and while I do try to adhere to professional writing and craft rules, I make no guarantee of being 100% accurate or never hurting your feelings. I am here to edit your work and give my feedback to the best of my ability. It’s what you’re paying me for. And while I will discuss your strengths, I won’t focus on them. After all, you are here for your weaknesses and for help tightening up the story to the best it can be. And, on that note, again, this is why I HIGHLY recommend the trial run, so you can feel totally comfortable with me and my editing style.